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March 4th, 2010


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07:56 am - Too Much Too Young
So this (below the cut) is the poem I have written about the lyrics of 'Too Much Too Young' by Jerry Dammers. Strange to write a poem about a poem (link above is to the lyrics).

Many poems implore the reader to marry and have a child. For example a lot of Shakespeare sonnets say that. This Specials song takes the opposite view, saying 'what an idiot you were to get married and have a child'. It is influenced by the Jamaican Lloyd Charmers' song "Birth Control" ('Oh no, no gimme no more pickni').

I was eighteen when this song reached number one. I completely agreed with its premise - I didn't want to get married and raise a family. Now, I am a married woman with grown up children, and I feel more ambivalent. I dislike the way that teenage mothers are vilified. On the other hand I do agree that birth control should be celebrated. So - ambivalent.

Therefore my poem is called Two-tone.

Two-tone

to my beloved - look not in your glass
reflecting on the waste of years to come
or the inevitable silvering of time

do not inflict yourself repeatedly upon the earth

be sterile
for the world is over-peopled
and this town
is coming like a ghost town
so do not warm your oven -
dance
like a mayfly
above the long water

for the ten-year winter comes, when the
dance halls will close
and the factories will dissolve
and teenage mothers will be vilified
alike by bishops, ministers, and boys
berating lovers
for their faithlessness

refuse to give yourself
to those who would diminish you
like the bride of emptiness
like a firework loosed into the dark air
give yourself to me

in the bathroom look into your glass
and ask your replicated face
is it better
to be remembered in this song
is it better to be recorded in this flesh
or
to burn up in the sky, and leave no trace

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From:communicator
Date:March 4th, 2010 03:32 pm (UTC)
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I don't know it, thanks that's a lovely delivery, more loving than the Specials lyrics

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